The Scope of Permissibility
Zeynab Gamieldien (Ultimo Press, available now)
Zeynab Gamieldien’s debut novel, The Scope of Permissibility, delicately weaves the perspectives of three university students who are members of the Muslim Students Association (MSA). Each character has a distinct cultural context, economic status and relationship with Allah, and their ambitions and views converge and conflict.
With great tenderness, Gamieldien allows us to slip into the intimate lives of her protagonists. Sara and Naeem are drawn to one another romantically and desperately negotiate personal desire with devotion to their faith. This clash is captured perfectly when Naeem teases ‘since only the first look is within the scope of permissibility, it was best to use it up on a nice long stare’. Abida, Sara’s best friend, is committed to social justice, believing that in life ‘it [is] essential to possess a cause’. She diligently campaigns to become the next president of the MSA. As each character tests the boundaries of their independence, we see how they are weighed down by the expectations of their family and friends.
Gamieldien captures the complexity of her characters beautifully, building tension without compromising compassion.
Far from the individualism of Western thinking, the novel sets up a wonderful sense of community. The permissibility in question is what we owe to one another and the cost of our choices. Gamieldien captures the complexity of her characters beautifully, building tension without compromising compassion towards them and their actions. As their inner worlds are unpacked, each character identifies their shortcomings. Sara worries that she is ‘not the daughter she ought to be’. Naeem recognises that ‘his faith [is] resolute but untested’. Abida, who hides her vulnerabilities behind her activism, is concerned that ‘her wide sweeps of judgment would be her undoing’.
The humanity given to these characters and their faults is incredibly valuable, as people from migrant and refugee diaspora communities are often judged harshly within their own cultural contexts, and also by those in positions of privilege, existing ‘to prove a point, or disprove one, chafing against impressions that [have] been long solidified’. There are moments in the novel when the characters’ seemingly sheltered world is pierced by the shards of racism and xenophobia. In an instance where Naeem and Sara gather to pray, their peace is interrupted by a stranger: ‘You and your terrorist slut girlfriend aren’t welcome here.’ Gamieldien does an excellent job of allowing the reader to bear witness to these violent intrusions without giving them space to overshadow the central narrative.
The Scope of Permissibility is a careful exploration of the ways in which we balance our personal values with the greater values of our community or our faith. It lovingly exposes the fragile threads that separate who we are, how we present ourselves to others and who we aspire to be. The novel showcases Gamieldien’s brilliant capacity for storytelling that is brimming with empathy and insight.
—Monikka Eliah